Ok, time to regroup, reread and see how badly I hate that all.
Oh my. He he he he he he. He said, he did, he, he, he,

Need some more character development, but I did plan on using the lack of it in my story. Hmmm, how to do both.
The twist in this may come too late, so far this sounds like a lame love story of sorts, but it wasn't the intent, just got carried away with my thoughts.
My foreshadowing is lacking, even though I know what it is, until I watched the Lost Season 1 Pilot episodes, I didn't appreciate it. I need to drop some key questions in the interaction earlier on and foreshadow what will transpire. Heh heh.